Being in the query trenches can be a confusing and sometimes isolating experience. As a skilled editor, beta reader/CP, and former Author Mentor Match mentor, I have a lot of experience honing and crafting pitches, queries, and opening pages, and am excited to help you polish yours before sending it off to agents!
Packages
I offer several different packages for my query critique services. You can choose from one of the following, and there is also the option to customize your services further, depending upon your needs.
- Query Letter Only
- Query Letter + First 10 Pages
- Query Letter + First 10 Pages + Synopsis
- Query Letter + First 3 Chapters
- Query Letter + First 3 Chapters + Synopsis
Add-Ons: With any package, you have the option of adding on a snippet graphic or book aesthetic, customized to your project.
For all query critique packages, you’ll receive the following…
- In-line edits and comments.
- A detailed edit letter that summarizes my thoughts and suggestions for improvement.
- A chance to ask questions and clarify any of my notes!
Testimonials
“Working with De was an absolute joy! She sees right to the heart of a query, and knows how to make it shine. She helped give my query package the final bit of sparkle it needed.” —Sophia
“I got my first-ever full request after working with De on a query critique. She’s great at identifying what you need to improve, while also being really enthusiastic and positive about your work.” —Caitlin
“De was absolutely SO helpful and kind in her critique services! Her critiques are constructive, precise and she offers positive feedback too. Her prices are great and reasonable. I will definitely go to De whenever I need a more professional eye to look at my work!” —Johnna
“De is wonderful to work with! I have used all her packages, and her insight and attention to detail are something that I truly appreciate. Her fast turnaround time, along with her fresh edits, makes your query package all the more stronger.” —Grace
“I was so nervous about starting to query, and De not only gave super helpful feedback about what worked and what didn’t, but provided wonderful insider pointers about formatting, comps, specific language pitfalls, and more. She’s also so encouraging and kind, and an amazing person to have in your corner.” —Lydia
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